Left alone again, all alone
Crying in this corner
Insecure and on my own
Disturbed and restless
Frightened to the bone
Dealing with a monster left unknown
Motionless as a stillborn
Tears are the only signs of life shown
Feeling so ripped and torn
I don't think I'm alive anymore...
Sunday, December 30, 2007
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4 comments:
Wow... this one's so beautiful... you create such an effect by letting all the lines rhyme except the last one.. and with such a message! i love it, sweetie. :)
Thanks sweetheart! :)
I have to agree with Becca, this poem is incredible, the only problem is becca ststed the best parts before I did :)
Haha! xD Thanks Ryan! :D
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