My nails are wet, so are my eyes
The result of my never ending cries
Me turning into what I despise
Left with no reason to devise
What will become of my life?
I feel I'm surrounded by spies
No trace of any left allies
Feels like all I do is compromise
I fear I will pay a heavy price
Will it be alright with my life?
I ache to the last cell that dies
I'm tired of hearing nothing but lies
And still I'm the one in disguise
I can't see any incoming prize
Can things be fixed in my life?
About
- Alev
- Antalya, Türkiye
- I'm someone that dreams 24/7. Someone that doesn't sleep at night to avoid missing the sunrise. Anyone of them can be my salvation. My way out. The thing that will light up my life like it does with the rest of the world. My hope. Until that day comes, I will spend my days in school and nights in front of the TV, listening to music like any other would do. It's just that simple.
My Inspiration, My Everything
I Give You the Best: Poets of the Fall!
Déjà Vu
4 comments:
thats truly a masterful way to write, all one rhyme sceme through the whole poem, I'd never be able to do swomething so tricky and pull off such an incredible poem.
GREAT JOB ALEV! :)
Wow, thanks so much for your wonderful words, Ryan! :D I didn't think it turned out that great; I mean it is another 2:00 AM poem, haha! xD xD Btw, don't underestimate yourself, I'm sure you can write a poem a lot better this one, this is a pretty rushed poem anyway. =)
Wow!! Your best one EVER!!!!
the 2 AM poems often are the best. peculiar really, but often true :P And honey, don't underestimate yourself either. Nothing good comes out of comparing your poetry skills to others. It is a genre that can not really be judged objectively. =)
Wow, thanks girl! :))))
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