I am here again, on my own
Walking on the same path
Feeling the same wrath
I feel like I'm split in half
There is not a trace of laugh
But nor an incoming tear bath
Either way nothing is in my behalf
You do the math...
About
- Alev
- Antalya, Türkiye
- I'm someone that dreams 24/7. Someone that doesn't sleep at night to avoid missing the sunrise. Anyone of them can be my salvation. My way out. The thing that will light up my life like it does with the rest of the world. My hope. Until that day comes, I will spend my days in school and nights in front of the TV, listening to music like any other would do. It's just that simple.
My Inspiration, My Everything
I Give You the Best: Poets of the Fall!
Déjà Vu
6 comments:
I really liked this poem but truthfull I think that the line: "I feel like I'm split to two half" should be more grammatically correct, such as: "I feel like I'm in split in half"
You want it, you got it! ;)
Thanks.
nice poem alev ;)
I really like this one! especially the last two lines, they rock! But i'm wondering if you wouldn't call it "on my behalf" instead of "in my behalf"...? raves, you're the native speaker here, help us out. ;)
Both on and in work the same way in that sentence, just depends on the way you learned it.
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Thanks Ryan =)
Wow, I've missed a lot :P
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