I can't believe I've done it again
Rattled the cages at the silliest time
To cave everything in
And blur things that made sense to me
I ask myself "What the hell?"
Like as if it wasn't enough
Burning the candle at both ends
I watched as my dreams too get haunted
Just can't learn these ain't fun stuff
I ask myself "What the hell?"
Friday, March 14, 2008
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6 comments:
I don't even know what to say, it's perfect!
I agree so angry but yet pristine in the use of words, GREAT WORK ALEV!
Glad you guys like it! I didn't think it was much... :P THANKS! :D
Haha! :D I gotta add that I love the way you swear in it.. hehe :P
what the hell!! its a great poem alev, i love the part burning candles from both ends it has so muck meaning
Haha xD Thanks. :D :D
Yeah, I thought that it fit perfectly to my daily life. :) Thanks. :)
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