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Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Touché

I think I've ruined my life
By thinking of you all the time
But then I go ahead and think
How much of a life can it be
If the one you love isn't in it?

6 comments:

Ryan said...

Wow, short and dead on! Incredible work with so few words!

Alev said...

Gee, thanks! :) It just came to me in the middle of a lecture. :P

Amin hosseini nasab said...

one thing came to my mind when i read this:

Anything can say it all
A whole page
A few words
Even an awkward silence
I would say something
But it would be nothing but nonsense

its some few words but meaning more than a whole page =)

Alev said...

WOW, THANKS!! :D Well, that was the main idea, hehe ^^

Poet In The Jar said...

I love it when you catch a single thought like this, it makes such a nice effect! Splendid poem! =)

Alev said...

Thanks sweetypie! :) I love it too. <3