I'm suffocating
Stuck in a pile of words
That can't seem to come out
And dragging me down with them
I can't see ahead
Sight blocked with a question
That I can't find an answer for
Blinding me to where I'm lead
I can't hear a voice
Ears plugged to a melody
That has no known notes
Leaving without a choice..
I'm disabled from life
Please try again later
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"Please try again later" :D
Ok sorry, I know it was a serious poem but the last line had me laughing out loud, it's just so me right now. =D The piece is great, really is. It's one of my favs of yours. <3
Hahahaha, serious poem kinda, but that part is also for fun. xD It's the perfect reflection of my life too. :D Thanks honey. <3
alev: "please try again later" is a brilliant line!!!! awesome girl!
Thanks! :D
yeah the last line "please try me again" cracked me up too :D
Hahahaha, I thought of phone lines being "disabled" when I wrote the line.. Thought it would be funny. :D
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