I had a dream last night
My dreams were coming true
Moving onto pink from blue
Happiness more than I ever knew
I had a dream last night
Everything was in a six-pack
I was on the right track
My real self had come back
I had a dream last night
Things were just alright
I was happy, my future was bright
I had what was my right
Then I woke up...
Friday, July 18, 2008
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"Then I woke up... "
What a kickass line! Made the whole poem resonate with a dying hope... thats how i feel about life right now, like i was always dreaming and i woke up after some words i can never give back.
But in truth i'll probly be thankful for those words eventually... "These are the gifts of terror..."
oh the many times ive been there :(
superb poem, the line "then i woke up" was a must it exists in every poem like this and it should, just saying its not so kickass! but the poem is more than kickass.
now this is an amazing line:
"Moving onto pink from blue"
Then I woke up..
This was the only line I had to begin with writing the poem, so I guess I owe the kickassness to that. xD
And about the pink-blue line, I thought it would be nice to use those to since they indicate happiness-sadness. Guess it turned out ok. :P
THANK YOU guys! :)
"Kickassness" hahaha! :D
Oh and wait, also the "six-pack" ? hahahaha! you have to stop talking to me, I get you a bad influence.
I like this poem, has to do with dying hope and dreams, it's just what I'm thinking of most these days! <3
Hahaha, ohh honey.. :D Thanks!
I had a dream just like this one last week, then like you said, I woke up... I hate when that happens. As you already know, my life is going through ups and downs right now and dream somehow lifts my spirit up only to know it just a dream. Great writing again, Alev!!!! Talk soon! xx, M~
Yeah.. Dreams are awesome, but I hate the waiting up part. xD Thanks, see you! :)
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