Awake at night here I lie
And I can't help but wonder why
How I ended up in this situation
And how I lost my intuition
Things got mixed up in a moment
Won't matter whether I'm here or absent
Words undoable has been said
My enthusiasm winded up dead
Because that's what you're good at
Making promises you never could've kept
Leaving me to my own misery
And pretending that I wasn't worthy
Go ahead, deny
I don't care
And I won't ask why
Because I know you too damn well
With a hypocrite I dwell
No more words left to tell
Sunday, December 21, 2008
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8 comments:
:o This is fucking great... this is more than that... this is your BEST PIECE. It hit me like a brick, especially the last lines. Make me feel sad though, everything ok? :/
Aww, thank youuu! <333 I didn't think it was that good really, I was so upset and scribbled some words down to my poetry book, saw this turned out. :P
Looking at the words, I could have written them as well... although maybe it wouldn't be such a beautiful poem then. :D
Naah, don't underestimate yourself, you know your poems are awesome. :D
wow! youre blog's changed!!! (i'm an idiot)
how r u alev? hope everythig is well, yeah i'm up to my head in work, and fucking exams are comming in 2 weeks, life sucks, i'll come around in about 3-4 weeks :( and the first thing i'm gonna do is read these beautiful poems!!! my god (he faints)
Amin, so nice to see you again !! *hugs*
Yeah, I got bored of the old layout. :D Thought a change couldn't hurt. :P (and you're not an idiot.)
I'm good, I have upcoming exams, too in a week.. I'm sure you'll do fine at your exams, greatest luck to you! Take care of yourself out there, hope I'll see you soon! =) (hahah, thanks. :D)
"Awake at night here I lie
And I can't help but wonder why"
these lines are pure class!!!!!!
(starting to wonder where these poems are comming from!? there have been a lot of them in your poetry, not lately but from very far away)
I don't know, momentarily breakdowns I guess. xD
Thank you ^^
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