Move on, go on, carry on
Nothing is happening around
There is no sobbing going on
It's just the wind that you hear
And the sound of sweet rain
Falling on the freshly mowed lawn
There is no one there sitting alone
It is just a random shadow
Caused by the greeting dawn
No, no, it's not tears you see
Nothing is going on here
There is no one there withdrawn
Insignificant for you to follow
It's just the walls full of echo
Reverberating of what's been here
But now that is gone
I know you'd still be indifferent
Even without these warnings
But just in case
Move on, go on, carry on
Nothing for you to see here
I'm not lying really
There truly isn't anything
Anything left of me
So, keep living on
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
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Sounds you're upset about something (hope it is not me...?) And believe me sweetheart... there IS something there, you are just such special something, don't give in... and don't urge the world around you to pass by without taking notice :/ I notice. I care. *hugs*
Wonderful piece though, quite unlike your style but I like the change :)
Awww, no, no, I'm not upset about anything. I know you do and I love you for it. *hugs* I was just listening to some sad song when I wrote it, you know how songs change your moods. :D And I got tired of the same pattern all over and over again, so I thought I try sth different this time. I'm glad you like it, thanks, star. <3 :)
Awwww how good to hear :) Love youuu :***
And yeah, music makes all the difference :D Sure, try some new stuff! I don't even think that I have a style myself but then suddenly every once in a while someone goes, "wow this is so unlike your style" and I wonder, hmm what is my style then? :D Hahaha now it was my turn to notice. :)
Hahaha, yeah, I guess. :D I just tried to avoid writing in stanzas this time, but other than that I don't really have a style either. It just comes to you and you write it, as you know. ;)
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omg, so so so so so beutiful, one of your best, its a master piece youde expect from a pro, and that shows you are one. again very beautiful (tears, the feeling anw)
Awww, thanks so much. *hugs* :)
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