Who are you to tell me who I am?
As even I don't know where I stand
As if I'm taking the ultimate exam
About a subject I don't even understand
Who are you to tell me who I am?
Even as I'm confused as hell
It's like the ultimate race in my life began
And where I must go, I can't even tell
About
- Alev
- Antalya, Türkiye
- I'm someone that dreams 24/7. Someone that doesn't sleep at night to avoid missing the sunrise. Anyone of them can be my salvation. My way out. The thing that will light up my life like it does with the rest of the world. My hope. Until that day comes, I will spend my days in school and nights in front of the TV, listening to music like any other would do. It's just that simple.
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12 comments:
Beautiful Alev, wonderfully worded, its a Genuinely AMAZING piece of poetry
Why thank you! =)
Oh fuck o_O
This is fucking brilliant :o
Really, the first whole stanza... no also the second.. no both stanzas! just.. wow, "about a subject I don't even understand"...
that's me in school, in a nutshell ^^ xD
haha no seriously i got the metaphor...
GOLDEN STAR for this one! <3
Hahahaha!
"oh fuck" That's real encouraging... *rolls eyes*
No, just kidding. ;D THANKS! Glad you like it. <3 I was pretty angry when I wrote this one. :P
And now I know why you were :D
I can so relate to it, you write always on the brink of total collapse and then the slightest light of hope, and weave it all together so nicely... <3
And seeing you know me so well, you should know "oh fuck" is about the best compliment I could ever give! xD
hah "oh fuck" is your best compliment beki? nice
great job there, but i dont really relate to it as much as the others, what life brings.....
Hahaha. xD xD Well, OK, I'll take that as a compliment from now on. ^^
Thanks! It's not really about what life brings anyway, it's just me being angry at my parents. xD
aaaaaaah parents, thats what life brings alev
Yeah, i guess so... :)
Yes that is my best compliment... I am not being ironic. At all ;)
so like in school when one of your students does an amazing job you shout " oh fuck " ??? :D
My answer to that is still NO! :D
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