Left alone inside the night with guilt and fear
Yet I can't even seem to spare a single tear
Everyone feels so distant though they're right here
I'm having one of those days again
Don't come near
So late at night yet I can not sleep
The pain I feel right now is so deep
Life gives me promises it can't keep
I'm having one of those days again
I feel like a creep
I close my eyes and start to dream away
To places I will never find my way
I still have a lot of debt to pay
I'm having one of those days again
I wander astray
Things could be so different right now
I wouldn't be questioning the why and how
But destroying me is pretty much life's vow
I'm having one of those days again
And I'll just say wow...
Monday, July 21, 2008
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Wow! That is all I have to say! Wow I really see myself in this and even more so it's brilliantly written... love the first and last stanza most... hang in there girl <3
You stole that from the last line... *rolls eyes* ;D It came to me when I was feeling down. Thanks honey. <3
i think everyone feels they connect to this poem but i realy feel this is actualy one of my own (thats how much i connect), this is one of your very best!!!!! my god :O
Gee... *blushes* Thanks so much Amin. :D
The poem is brilliant, so powerful in its link to our minds, i especially loved the first stanz tho they were all worthy of a standing ovation.
The first stanza is my favorite too, the rest was a bit forced but I'm glad you like it. Thanks. :D
This is really good. I used to write a lot of poetry not so much anymore.
Hi! Thank you so much! :D There is never enough poetry for me, I'd like to see you work. :)
Hello there! This is exactly how I feel at times, especially for the past few weeks. You're really good writer! I'll keep coming back for sure! Stay in touch!!!! xx, M~
Heey! :D Thanks so much for commenting! :) Yeah, we all have our moments I guess.. I sure will! See you around! :)
wow lotsa new faces on your site Alev, eh?
Hahahaha, yeah, I guess. =D
Wow, Amin thinks this is your best and he also thinks it feels like his own, hahaha ego? :P
Yeah, nice to see new peeps! =)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! You had me laughing forever! xD xD
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