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Sunday, May 11, 2008

NEVER LEAVE

I look like I'm trying to escape
But it's a hollow promise to make
All the locked doors I run into
Are just a plot against myself about you

All the unlocked doors I come against
I avoid them too, they go to waste
This can go on til forever
I look like I'm running, but never

Because this is where I belong to
Outside is unfamiliar, dark, cold and blue
I need to be in here to be able to breathe
This is the one place I could never leave

7 comments:

Ryan said...

I love this poem Alev, so incredibly written it gave me chills, great job!

Anonymous said...

THANKS so much!! :D =)

Poet In The Jar said...

I love the feeling of this poem!

Anonymous said...

I do too. :)

Poet In The Jar said...

Read it again just now... it earns a better comment than my previous one! Loved the "locked doors" part... and the plot against yourself... very deep. Love it! <3

Amin hosseini nasab said...

"I look like I'm running, but never" i love this!!

Anonymous said...

:D