The snow falls down
Covers all over the city
But it can't cover up my pain
The sadness I feel inside me
It is raining outside
Washing away all the dirt
But it doesn't take everything away
It can't undo how I'm hurt
The sun's coming out
Lights everything around
But it can't show my agony
In this darkness, how I drown
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6 comments:
I love this poem! Its perfectly dark, Great job once again Alev!!
Thanks R! :D
Gotta agree, "perfectly dark" is the best description. I fell in love with these lines soon as I read them. Wonderfully written!
Aww, thanks sweetheart! :D
so long sice i've been here (on blogspot) wow great poems alev, i love this last one flows perfectly and you made a connection to weather and your feelings, i love that ;)
Thanks! :D
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