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Monday, November 26, 2007

D.N.R.

The angel of death is coming
I can feel it gain on me
When everything goes dark
I want it to remain that way
In stillness and numbness
Do not revive me

When the time comes
It's all going to go down
All hopes and expectations
Dreams and the worst fears
As everything demolishes, so will I
Do not resurrect me

I feel getting closer to there
Where nothing matters anymore
The absolute truth lies there
Where all the pain will be gone
I want to stay there
Do not resuscitate me

4 comments:

Ryan said...

Incredible job Alev, cant say why but it was an incredible poem, my feelings are distraught on which takes dominion over the others, probably because of surgery anxiety...

Amin hosseini nasab said...

great dark poem alev

and i will read that story of yours down there but understand i dont hav 5 minutes to spare i promise to read it soon:)

Poet In The Jar said...

Wow, I really agree, this is like, one of your best poems, alev! =) It's so dark but at the same time so beautiful... like, feeling that there's something better after we die, or maybe you meant it like this, that anything would be better than staying alive? Anyway, I love it, loved how you used synonyms for "revive" in the recurring last sentences of each verse, that really got to me... Awesome to read something new from you! :)

Alev said...

Wow, thanks so much you guys! =)